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Old Friends by Elisha Porat

This prickly rush, with whose spines
I stitched my tattered youth;
this weeping willow, played
by the wind on my secret ramblings;
this purple loosestrife, whose
pink flowers I placed on
a table for my love; they all
call to me along the path: Come,
join us, come, fade
with us into the moist morning mist.

"Don't wait for me," I
call out to them from my groaning memory,
"I am on my way, I'll be there
soon." And on my return from the stream bank
I know: They will wait,
I will come, my aging heart
is already there, with them, anticipating
me always by a few steps.


©09/09.06 Elisha Porat
Translated from the Hebrew by Cindy Eisner

Comments

Excellent and very sad.

An accurate depiction of death's inevitability. Enjoyed greatly.

The poignancy in this cries out in a very understated - and effective - manner. A great capture, Elisha.

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