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What a jangled sense of imagery that colourfully and smoothly flows into one full length poem.

those myths where they find us,
Abduct us, seduce us,
Take us where they will.

Wonderful!

David: This is wonderful. You might say...a mythical journey...

David, I really enjoy your work...! The imagery and the mood are mesmerizing.

"Until he is distracted
When a girl with abstract expressionist hair
Slings her book bag over her shoulder
And flounces out the door
Like there ought to be a law against her
And maybe there is
But not in Paris.
I tell you, those myths they will take you
By the scruff of your scrawny neck.
It has happened to me,
An afternoon with Chloé
In a film by Rohmer,
A brightly colored kite
Dancing in the blue of the air
On the side of a hill..."

I read this and I'm there. Amazing work!

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