frosty night,
echo of a bell
opens the sky
(posted in Russia on Ulitka#1)
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Hi Andrea,
I really like this one. I'm wondering if "bell's echo" might be better, simply because otherwise I think you'd need an article in front of bell.
The mood this creates is quite pleasing!
Posted by: Aurora | July 29, 2007 at 06:56 PM
I am with Aurora. The article "a" is implied in "Bell's echo."
Posted by: Yu Chang | July 29, 2007 at 09:17 PM
Thanks Aurora and Yu: it was only a typo (shame on me!) ;-)
Posted by: Andrea | July 30, 2007 at 04:05 AM
Enjoyed!
Posted by: Robert | July 31, 2007 at 12:33 PM
Thanks!
Posted by: Andrea | July 31, 2007 at 02:05 PM