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Nice to see Aurora's tanka and Ildi's on haystacks. Wonderful photo! Here's a piece I'm just writing having viewed a number of fields with these cake-like haystacks last weekend. Suggestions/Comments always welcome.
Ray

Haystacks

The haystacks of my boyhood were rectangular bundles, small enough to load by hand on the back of a pickup. There was an intimacy in working with them--the smell of cut grass, the rhythm of lifting and stacking, sweat stinging the eyes, the itch caused by the rough edges, an ice tinkling jug of lemonade at midday break.

Monet's haystacks series, done in rich pastels, represents the play of light at different times and seasons in the fields of his time. While no people are shown, so infused with the human are these images that one easily imagines farmhands scything the grass, forking it into yurt-like piles, cowlicks in their tousled hair, stopping occasionally to munch bread and cheese and to guzzle home brewed beer. 

Today, haystacks are rolls that resemble large golden cakes randomly strewn about the freshly mown fields. There's the same fragrance, but the land has the surrealistic look of a production line, absent of humans, as if the fields have been plundered rather than caressed. 

In one, long lines of bales are wrapped in white plastic, like sausages for a race of giants. I imagine Grant Wood's American Gothic, but without the pitchfork, the house, ultra modern, the wife's countenance, dour, as she puts everything in its right place at the dinner table, the family sitting as if at attention, the talk sanitized, a glass of buttermilk beside each plate. 

sunset
red plastic flowers 
on the war memorial

or

garage cleaning day
a thick layer of dust
on the canning jars

supermarket muzak
garden herbs in
plastic containers

Katrinaresized

waving from rooftops –
another party
in the French Quarter?

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convention center — 
potty parity
in New Orleans

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two days ..... Floodtreen
after the hurricane –
tears for strangers

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treading water:
“keep your chin up”
the President says

- originally posted in GW: "the check's in the mael(strom)" (f/k/a. Sept. 2, 2005); and see "one haijin's return to New Orleans: david lanoue" (F/k/a, Feb. 17, 2006) -

months later 
he still clutches
the bowling ball—
all he could salvage
after Katrina



remembering the Hurricane Katrina victims (Aug. 29, 2005)


janet lynn davis
Wisteria; MET

Bumper_crop_resized

just past sunset - . . . . . Cloudboltsn
thunderheads overtake
a sepia-tinted cloud

Log_haiga


cracked tomatoes
from grandfather’s garden. . .
summers later
the imperfections
grown sweeter in my mind   

 

one hundred degrees
pool all to myself---
I seal my eyes shut
imagine I’m hot hot hot
as a swimsuit model

[and that takes some imagining]

beneath the stream
from the old woman’s hose,
a small smiling girl
limbo-dancing

to summer


janet lynn davis
tanka first appeared in Ribbons (Tanka Cafe), 2006 and 2007, and Simply Haiku, 2005.

 

too muggy to cuddle --
a lone firefly
glows on ...... and off
....................................... Fireflyn_2
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cloud-covered night--
no moon, no fireflies,
no goodnight kiss
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Labor Day
out of hot dogs
and fireflies

Fireflyn_2

my slow ramble
through our summer scenes
a few notes
the phoebe doesn't answer
mute geese are flying south

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