I had them,
the words that fit
perfectly,
but then I see you-
mere words vanish
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The image of Shane's mooning haiga has that effect on people. :)
Posted by: Aurora | September 27, 2007 at 11:08 AM
thanks for sharing this. I think we all can relate to this one!
Posted by: janet lynn davis | September 27, 2007 at 12:35 PM
This could be good or bad. Nice poem.
Posted by: Bryan | September 27, 2007 at 01:11 PM
A lovely sentiment.
Posted by: Felicia Dahl | September 27, 2007 at 02:36 PM
I'd change the "then" to "when" but that's just me. Good tanka, Andrew.
Posted by: Matt | September 27, 2007 at 03:24 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by: Robert | September 27, 2007 at 11:48 PM
Great tanka, Andrew! Been there before.
Posted by: collin | September 28, 2007 at 11:18 PM