monday morning ~
a slug
on the driveway
***
lundi matin ~
une limace
dans l'allée du garage
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Oh, how I relate to this poem! Of course, sometimes I don't want to go to work on other days of the week, too. :)
Here in Canada, we translate the phrase, "l'allée du garage" as "the driveway". However, instead of saying, "in the driveway", we would say, "on the driveway".
Posted by: Aurora | September 01, 2007 at 01:02 PM
Otherwise known as the working man's blues. Enjoyed, Damien.
Posted by: Robert | September 01, 2007 at 03:06 PM
Aurora, once more thank you for your rereading and help in English : "driveway" is far more better ; a new word I learn - I correct the haiku ...
Thank you too Robert
Posted by: Damien Gabriels | September 02, 2007 at 02:22 AM
I know the feeling. Enjoyed this.
Posted by: janet lynn davis | September 03, 2007 at 12:22 AM