text previously appeared in Carolyn Thomas's Heron.
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I really like the poem.
Posted by: Aurora | October 16, 2007 at 07:38 PM
This is one of my long-term favorites, eric. Did I first read it in Carolyn Thomas's Heron, and was it on a bookmark, too?
Posted by: Peggy | October 16, 2007 at 10:12 PM
i like this one too.
Posted by: shane | October 16, 2007 at 11:22 PM
shane & aurora: thank you.
peggy: i have unfortunately lost all my records of my older poetry, in fact, if i hadn't posted this on my blog in '05 i would have lost the poem as well. . . . but i do believe you're right on both counts now that i think about it. Thank you. I'll add Heron to its publishing track record.
Posted by: eric | October 17, 2007 at 12:14 AM
Eric. This is fantasic. Great haiku!
Posted by: collin | October 17, 2007 at 12:34 AM
Nicely done, eric! I love the haiku.
Posted by: collin | October 17, 2007 at 12:35 AM
Sorry for the two comments. I didn't think my first one went through. I suppose I doubly enjoyed this!
Posted by: collin | October 17, 2007 at 12:46 AM
A classic, Eric.
Posted by: Bill | October 19, 2007 at 04:57 PM
Wonderful resonances!
Posted by: sangeet | October 23, 2007 at 05:14 PM