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Magnapoets Poets' Profiles
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- Susan on daydreaming . . . through
- Vaughn Seward on daydreaming . . . through
- Adelaide on spring clean-upin the sweat of
- laryalee on twilight in the garden... swat!
- laryalee on theres no place like home–-but
- aurora on twilight in the garden... swat!
- laryalee on spring clean-upin the sweat of
- laryalee on daily horoscope -a little bit
- laryalee on daydreaming . . . through
- aurora on daydreaming . . . through
Japanese Form Publications
- American Tanka | Poetry in the Moment
- bottle rockets
- Concise Delight Magazine of Short Poetry, at MET Press
- Contemporary Haibun Online
- Eucalypt A Journal of Tanka
- Frogpond Journal
- Haiga Online
- Mayfly Haiku Magazine
- Modern English Tanka
- Modern Haiku
- moonset literary newspaper
- RIBBONS Tanka Society of America's Journal
- Roadrunner Haiku Journal
- Simply Haiku
- The Heron’s Nest
- tinywords: haiku daily
- White Lotus
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Well, this is a startler, after all the time we've been spending in bars. Works fine on its own, though. The relation between lines 1-2 and the rest is just mysterious enough to tease the reader into thought.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | February 18, 2008 at 12:29 PM
The line "counting them all" make this especially work for me.
Posted by: aurora | February 18, 2008 at 02:10 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by: Robert | February 18, 2008 at 06:04 PM
Thank you all for your kind words.
Posted by: Andrew | February 18, 2008 at 11:12 PM
Good one
Posted by: Matt | February 19, 2008 at 11:11 PM