happy hour
he tells me again
he doesn't miss her
(Published in Sketchbook)
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"he tells me again" really makes this work for me.
Posted by: aurora | March 16, 2008 at 12:36 AM
Nothing happy about that hour. Good one.
Posted by: Bryan | March 17, 2008 at 09:36 AM
Thanks, Aurora and Bryan. During one of his sober periods, Truman Capote said that one of the things he noticed was how his friends tended to repeat themselves after six o'clock. In lower rent districts than Capote frequented, happy hour starts a bit earlier.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | March 17, 2008 at 10:16 PM
well done, Bill!
Posted by: Andrea | March 18, 2008 at 05:59 PM
bill and andrea -- more "booze" haiku at magnapoets...we have quite a collection here now! i like them both.
Posted by: janet | March 18, 2008 at 07:29 PM
Thank you, andrea and Janet.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | March 19, 2008 at 09:27 PM
Excellent.
Posted by: Robert | March 20, 2008 at 03:31 PM