homemade
books—
You can be a writer
my dad once said
though hoping, I suspect,
I'd do something sensible
first pub'd in Simply Haiku, spring 2008.
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Ha! :)
If you were to put out a book, do you think your father would love it?
Posted by: aurora | April 02, 2008 at 12:57 PM
I like so much your poem Janet...
beautiful!
Posted by: Andrea | April 02, 2008 at 02:29 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by: Robert | April 02, 2008 at 06:42 PM
Good one
Posted by: matt | April 02, 2008 at 07:23 PM
beautiful indeed!
Posted by: princess butterfly (kai) | April 02, 2008 at 07:37 PM
thanks for the nice comments, all.
A -- if it were a book of poetry, NO. if it were some book of prose that "did well," YES, maybe. ;)
Posted by: janet lynn davis | April 02, 2008 at 11:55 PM