black night -
run of the wind
in the silent street
***
nuit noire -
la course du vent
dans la rue silencieuse
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I like "run of the wind" perhaps even more than "la course du vent." A fine ku, anyway.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | June 15, 2008 at 04:41 PM
Oui, je suis d'accord avec Bill - la version anglaise me plaît encore davantage que la version française. Ce serait intéressant d'analyser pourquoi.
Posted by: Monika | June 16, 2008 at 08:56 AM
On the other hand, "silencieuse" is a powerful ending, and you can't do that in English.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | June 16, 2008 at 12:17 PM
I like them both. :)
Posted by: aurora | June 18, 2008 at 11:25 AM